I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 16 September 2019
Dogs on the Beach
Last week, We had to do a Writing Assessment about dogs on the beach, here is mine.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Gucci how are you i like your work you did for writing
ReplyDeleteHey Anica/"Gucci Gang" 😑😒
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you added pictures and different background instead of a solid background color. Maybe next time you could add a transparent picture? If you want. WELL SHORT STUFF IS SIGNING OUT BYE!!!